As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am administering a group of pupils to visit the historical exhibition in Shaftesbury, UK next month. This tour will be a part of our school activities to encourage young students to participate in social surveys and grow interests in history. I would really appreciate if you could forward me some information regarding the exhibition.
First of all, when the exhibition will be held and what are the daily opening hours? Secondly, is the exhibition suitable for the fourth and fifth graders? Please notify me about the theme and exhibited objects on display. This would help me better explain to my students about the content during our trip. Finally, what are the other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?
I am planning to bring over twenty students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire whether we are eligible for any discount on entrance tickets. If there is no general discount, could you please arrange one for students?
Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02234636872 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.793217876 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.972236311 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235755861005 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673897909995 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367654244577 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127938564558 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615236253275 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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