People in your are are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter
- Describe the problems.
- Explain how they are affecting people.
- What company should do to help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am hereby writing to you my complain about internet connection offered by your company in our Pune area.
Let me explain the situation. From last 7-10 days, there is no range to internet modem as well as to mobile phones. Some times this range appears in day time, but it is intermittant. Internet speed is all time low, below 50 mbps.
This low speed and frequent disconnections affect families and companies in this area. IT companies are not able to complete their projects based on internet. Same is case for school childrens, they are also having problem in finishing their internet based tutorials. Without internet, life is almost standstill here.
This problem must be due to old tower of your company. This tower either needs to have a maintenance or should be replaced with more efficient new generation tower. This updation can assure a good range, increase in speed and overall a happy customer for your company.
I hope you will pay attention to my complaint and take necessary corrective measures.
Thanking you in advance.
Yours Faithfully
V B
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65848656258 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728260869565 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0280432677 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2666666667 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207415477707 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653069548613 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516457490815 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794608667831 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716227688811 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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