People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Ragesh R. I am writing to you as we are encountering continuous internet connectivity issues in the Abbigere locality.
Firstly, the band width we receive in our area is very minimal due to which the speed getting reduced. Secondly, there is a frequent disconnection of internet is been experienced from past few days.
On the other hand, These issues are directly impacting the residents of the Abbigere locality in terms of their day to day life. There are quiet number of employees who are working from home and many students are unable to complete their assignments on time due to bad connectivity. Also there are number of house wives facing trouble as they are depending on the online shopping for their daily groceries.
Request your immediate attention in this matter to have these issues addressed and resolved at the earliest. Your immediate attention is greatly appreciated.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Ragesh R
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nments on time due to bad connectivity. Also there are number of house wives facing ...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...r of house wives facing trouble as they are depending on the online shopping for their daily ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89816752449 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6625 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.945458486 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121983822756 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435606223009 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326077195224 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478587996099 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295121023651 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.