Please write your letter here:
Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons.
Write a letter to a teacher asking for help. In your letter:
1. explain why your son needs help
2. ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods
3. and suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.
Dear Mrs Jamerson,
This letter is regarding the enrollment for French classes that you are teaching at your academy . My son Dan has opted for an additional language for his eighth grade and wanted him to attend few calsses with you.
Since we had to travel for my brother's wedding, which was overseas. Dan had to miss few of his initial classes. Furthermore, the teacher informed us that she will neither be able to provide him with extra notes nor give him tutions for the course missed. Therefore, it is impretive for us to seek a learned tutor to get him upto date with the class.
I hope you do not mind me asking about your previous teaching experience as well as what process do you follow to test the lessons that would be taught. Additionally, will there be assignments and quiz for the students? FInally, will you be giving any notes for the preparation of annual exams.
For the current school session, Our son has to attend soccer practice almost everyday but Tuesday, Friday 5 till 6pm he has no practice. This time suits us however, any time slot that would suit you, please let us know. Hopefully, we can make an adjustment with the timing.
Let me know if you wish to discuss further. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Martha Steward
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es that you are teaching at your academy . My son Dan has opted for an additional ...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...on has to attend soccer practice almost everyday but Tuesday, Friday 5 till 6pm he has ...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tend soccer practice almost everyday but Tuesday, Friday 5 till 6pm he has no pra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72123893805 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42363625404 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685840707965 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1558708526 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179387742279 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053297726266 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596838476025 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830777777246 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641571988868 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.