Q you have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Introduce your self
Explain what experience and special skills you have
Explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Nitant Mishra and I am writing to apply for the post of an editor in the library in the city museum shop.Got to know about this vacant position from an Economic times two days before,28th July.
I am good at proof reading and then editing.I have assisted my friend's father in his book library during my vacations to gain some experience.I was involved mainly in distribution and finance but simultaneously,I learnt editing as well.As and when I got used to it,was getting more and more opportunities for the same.So I have a good hands on experience in this.I have attended few online seminars and took a formal training from one of the chief editor Mr.Basu of a Business magazine.
I want to learn something that is of my interest and which can be useful to others also.By working in my free time in a museum, will learn many aspects which might be useful in my studies.
I am sure you will give this opportunity to me.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Nitant Mishra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Nitant Mishra and I am writing to a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Got
... in the library in the city museum shop.Got to know about this vacant position from...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onomic times two days before,28th July. I am good at proof reading and then edit...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... good at proof reading and then editing.I have assisted my friends father in his ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ng my vacations to gain some experience.I was involved mainly in distribution and...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng my vacations to gain some experience.I was involved mainly in distribution and...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tribution and finance but simultaneously,I learnt editing as well.As and when I go...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to edit'.
Suggestion: to edit
...and finance but simultaneously,I learnt editing as well.As and when I got used to it,wa...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...simultaneously,I learnt editing as well.As and when I got used to it,was getting m...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , was
...ing as well.As and when I got used to it,was getting more and more opportunities for...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ore and more opportunities for the same.So I have a good hands on experience in th...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...have a good hands on experience in this.I have attended few online seminars and t...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Basu
...raining from one of the chief editor Mr.Basu of a Business magazine. I want to lea...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...erest and which can be useful to others also.By working in my free time in a museum,...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
... and which can be useful to others also.By working in my free time in a museum, wi...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...is opportunity to me. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Ni...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nitant Mishra
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nitant Mishra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65193370166 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66990915268 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.137874623 44.8134815571 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 16.8248392259 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175807151355 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837717524223 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377572875237 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946749578906 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352435959641 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.