On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter1. Describe the item you lost2. explain how you lost it3. tell

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to know how you can help me in covering my missing laptop, which I have lost during my recent holidays last week.

Let me briefly explain about my lost laptop. The black colour dell laptop which I have been using from last 2 years has a blue colour Reebok sticker on the back side of it that makes it unique and easy to find.

Last week, I spent my holidays at beach in Australia, where I stayed in a hotel for 4 days. Unfortunately, I forgot to carry my laptop with me before leaving the room as I was in the hurry while I was getting late for boarding the bus to airport.

While I had a seat n the airplane, I realized that my laptop has been missing and I was very anxious about this. But soon, I realized that I had a travel insurance. It would be very kind if you could help in finding my laptop or can refund me money according to market value. Thanks for your assistance.

I will wait for your prompt response

Yours sincerely
Kawaljit Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27368421053 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29466441218 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2645652741 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142873040858 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598172938576 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579927872311 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835746154694 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675727735208 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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