On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards of covering the costs of the laptop I accidentally forgotten during the family trip to Maldives. please, consider my insurance claim.
I owned the silver Macbook Air with the following details: 17” diagonal, 4GB RAm and 120GB hard drive. I used it for my job purposes.
I left it in the taxi while trying to reach the departing flight. Being a well-organized person, even I was not able to predict that we would have to stay in the traffic for the four hours. Feeling that we were almost late, we did not double-check the luggage. I realized I had lost the computer only when we landed in Moscow airport.
I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the item mentioned above. Could you please send me details on what should I do to proceed with this matter.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours
Yulia Tekin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards of covering the costs of the laptop I acci...
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Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...ten during the family trip to Maldives. please, consider my insurance claim. ...
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Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I used it for my job purposes. I left it in the taxi while trying to rea...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89873417722 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57236244528 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715189873418 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8220912598 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143147624826 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434206600874 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402392411398 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660701781072 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411080371164 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.