On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter-Describe the item you lost-Explain how you lost it-Tell insurance com

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On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to ask about the procedure to claim the insurance amount, Which I have purchased previous year against the I-phone x. Reason being why I lost it during my holiday in goa last week on 22nd of June. This gadget is quite expensive worth 80,000 rupees.

I lost it during my return from goa to Mumbai in rajdhani express. The train was full and there pass no place to sit. I remember when train stopped in station to load more passenger the situation more like stampede. I could not resist the crowd and fell down and lost my phone. All trip was

it would be great if you check the details of policy number PR-125679WE with the name of Praveen and let me know by when I can contact you for further formalities and process. do tell me if anything else is required from my end.

Hope to hear from as soon as possible.

Your Faithfully,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... against the I-phone x. Reason being why I lost it during my holiday in goa last ...
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...ell down and lost my phone. All trip was it would be great if you check the detai...
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...ou for further formalities and process. do tell me if anything else is required fr...
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...oon as possible. Your Faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28801223773 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4907761528 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176749233074 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053068746595 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432669687788 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728156773534 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044218463158 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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