On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the costs. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my smartphone on my vacation in London. Thankfully, I have secured it at your insurance company.
This smartphone was bought a week before the trip. It was a brand new MI4. This model is quite expensive so you can imagine how stressed and upset I was when I realized that it was gone. I suspect that I forgot the phone in one of the countless bars I visited on 22nd of July. However, it could be stolen that day. I reported to the police next day, but, unfortunately they were not able to help.
I would like to obtain the full cost of my phone. Therefore, I am attaching to this letter the bill for this smartphone with all necessary details about the purchase and filled insurance application. Another necessary information is my client number. It is 500023. I would be grateful if you could consider my issue as soon as possible.Thank you for your time and consideration.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully,
Tim Sin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thank
...d consider my issue as soon as possible.Thank you for your time and consideration. I...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58011049724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80611862922 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3985145278 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.2666666667 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0666666667 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175753900794 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048747923335 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657956202843 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105455614309 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362113691983 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.