A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiter and waitress in your local newspaper.
-explain what you are currently doing
-describe your suitability for this area of work
-say when you can attend an interview
Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to apply for a job position that has placed in our local newspaper as a waitress. Your restaurant is one of the famous spot among Thailand dishes.
Last month, I just graduated from high school, and I have prepared to enter undergraduate school in this spring. As I say, now I am unemployed states. So my parents suggested that I should save much money to afford your campus life before I enroll the school. The tutition fee is quiet higher that my parents expect. By getting this job position, my parents will not be worried no more.
Waitress should cooperate together with Kitchen and Hall. The essential condition of the position is allowing customers to feel comfortable during their dinner or lunch. The customers can be served their dishes properly, quickly and neatly. Our family used to have family gathering for a while and I took care of entire dishes with my brother. Relatives did not have any complain and always gave us compliments.
It will be perfect to make job interview on May 5th during the restaurant break time.
Best Regards,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s allowing customers to feel comfortable during their dinner or lunch. The custom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85263157895 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56880928904 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7637808932 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8571428571 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131349886213 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380639638202 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400687824627 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086003878616 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639839676246 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.