A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:explain what you are currently doingdescribe your suitability for this area of worksay when

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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the advertisement of waiters and waitresses requirement in your restaurant. I am doing the same job in a hotel Lido at Delhi location. My job is a part-time job from 6 PM to 10 PM every day including weekends.

I have a complete knowledge of this work. I am aware of roles and responsibilities of waiter job as this September I will finish 4 years of experience in this field. In addition to that, I can work at any hours of the day, even full-time as well. I also have a bicycle for travelling; thus, pick and drop facility is not required.

Currently I am not doing anything in the morning hours; therefore, I can come any day during morning time for the interview purpose, if my resume is shortlisted for the interview purpose. Please find the attachment at back side including my brief resume.

I would be grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inquire abou...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69005847953 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95037208871 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0016336418 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235239910529 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079321721409 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071769267812 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120227060924 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386495437944 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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