The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road.
In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain the condition of the road
• and suggest what they should do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the negligence in the task of repairing the road by the municipal authority workers.
My name is Prabhpreet Kaur working as a Senior Manager in HSBC Bank and resident of New Friends Colony residing in House Number 27 for the past 13 years.
Last month, due to heavy rains the road in the front of my house was damaged. There is a big pothole in the middle of the road. During rains the pothole is filled with water making it difficult for driving cars. Moreover, many children have got hurt while riding the bicycle and also the water logging becomes the home of mosquitoes causing many diseases
I would suggest you to take immediate actions and send a team of efficient workers for repairing the damaged road as soon as possible so that not only there are no casualties but also to avoid people from suffering several health issues
I hope you will get the issue resolved immediately.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple from suffering several health issues I hope you will get the issue resolved i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83977900552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52913187539 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.050427328 44.8134815571 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.5 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176227015757 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076068365168 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640000475637 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663303601155 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711381103114 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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