In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years flaunting weapons has become a fashion in various nations. Due to possession of firearms by denizens, cases of shootings are rising day by day. I totally agree with this statement and the contributing factors will be scrutinized in the forthcoming paragraphs before venturing a logical conclusion.
Allowing public to keep guns at their homes is one of the big reasons behind the violence. This trend not only normalizes the weapon culture in the country, but also promote the domestic crimes. If authorities allow citizens of their nation to purchase arms without any license, it would be difficult to control the cases of crime in households. In countries like America for instance, there are no restrictions on buying ammunition, which ends up in plethora of cases of gunpoint robberies in various areas. Thus, it is essential to impose some restriction on possession of weapons by public.
Manufacturing and supply of illegal firearms is another point of concern. Though in some regions obtaining license is a compulsion before buying weapons, some unlawful trading of rifles and similar items give access to everyone for buying them. Uttar Pradesh state of India is the best example while talking about producing and supplying illegal armaments in most of the areas of northern India. Despite various strict actions by the police and government, smugglers are selling the pistols without any fear.
To conclude, possession of firearms in almost every house is a matter of concern these days. Availability of guns for everyone should be restricted which can be achieved with the efforts of government and the concerned authorities. There is a long way to keep situation under control, however some countries have already achieved that. Imposing punishments and penalties on unnecessary ownership of weapons can be another way to control the rate of incidents which have taken a toll in the past few years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 26.3917525773 235% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 311.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22186495177 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81392555421 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 290.88556701 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5601265008 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104632510039 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300940384203 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365810129882 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0557485896765 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142219161801 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 41.2886597938 235% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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