In some countries, the population is increasing at an unsustainable rate, What are the problems, and what solutions do you suggest?
It is an irrefutable fact that in some countries, the population is rising at an alarming rate. This elevated trand of popluation will brings out numeras issues, that need urgent action. This easy will analyse or explain various common reasons and possible solution.
To begin with, I would like to highlight a research published by university of alberta early this year. This research covered top 5 countries that are facing common problem i.e. the drastically increasing rate of population growth. The reaserches noticed couple of similer reason among all these countries. Starting with lack of awareness among familes leaving rural areas and goverment benifit plans and policies were not revised since implemented.This research also highlighted that some of these countries started facing scarecity of daily use energy resources such as water, Petrol and other gases.
Furthermore, This trand can be controlled by implemented some basic but useful steps. Firstly, People specially in rural areas should made aware about the irreverable effects of increasing population and ways to prevent it. Secondly, People should be made aware of renewable sources of energy and its long term benifits to them and to the soceity. For example some one who daily drives to around 100 km each day and uses 10 ltr of gas every day can save that shifting to electic vahical. Similery, daily household electricity needs can be easily fulfilled by implementing solar energy based solution.
In conclusion, I would like to state that although rising popluation now a days is one of the greatest problem. However, This upward trend can be controlled by spreading awareness and switching to non-traditional energy sources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 937.175257732 154% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34074074074 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79966684281 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655555555556 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3227815525 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 4.34317383033 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131264042401 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048337772131 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796279691983 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773368930955 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430644689521 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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