The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Amelia henson, a resident of Bedford neighbourhood, writing on behalf of our community members to express our discontent with the way waste is collected in our area. We have been expecting a change for the last couple of weeks and now hoping for an immediate solution.
We really appreciate the hard work staffs of the local council do to manage garbage in our neighbourhood and their contributions in keeping our neighbourhood clean. However, they often do not collect the household wastage from the designated garbage bins in the morning and when they arrive to collect them in the evening, wild cats and dogs litter garbage outside the bins. On top of that, no one comes to collect garbage on public holidays and this simply makes the situation worse.
Bad odour spreads in the neighbourhood due to this, and in some streets, bins overflow with garbage only to make it unhygienic for the residents. Moreover, overflowing containers become a breeding ground for mosquitoes, houseflies and other insects. they enter our homes making us prone to developing myriads of infectious diseases.
As a viable solution, please make sure your staffs clean the garbage bins every single day – both in the morning and evening. If required, allow them to work in shifts and please reserve some staffs for holidays. I would also request you to provide bins with different colours for the segregation of waste in our community.
I hope you will consider my suggestions and take immediate actions to solve the problem.
Yours faithfully,
Amelia henson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...squitoes, houseflies and other insects. they enter our homes making us prone to deve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 937.175257732 141% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07662835249 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74995979718 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.0457708997 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208628850666 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069459257655 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296588478361 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951694842864 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384861890229 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.