The System used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
• Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly.
• Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours.
• Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing this letter to inform you about the garbage collection facility in our area is out of order and not functioning properly. Previously every day there was a truck which used to come in our area to collect all the garbage in front of the house bin’s but we noticed that for few weeks the garbage collection truck is not coming because the truck engine got some problems.
Since the truck is not coming for few weeks which causing ample amount of rubbish around the area. Our children used to play outside the house and due to rubbish there are a lot of germs are born which is making our children and old sick.
I would suggest to get the garbage collection truck fixed as soon as possible and in the meantime please arrange another truck which can quickly clean the area from rubbish so the further spread of disease can be stopped.
Your help is much appreciated.
You’re sincerely
Yasir Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I'm writing this letter to inform y...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest getting'.
Suggestion: suggest getting
...ng our children and old sick. I would suggest to get the garbage collection truck fixed as s...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h appreciated. You're sincerely Yasir Ali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70481927711 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31715637549 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2170874166 44.8134815571 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236510819473 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105119910756 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474755542289 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114340794117 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503065947646 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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