Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the advancements of the technology, more and more people tend to use their mobile phones, tablets or laptops for watching movies or dramas with the comfort of their own. In the old days people used to go to cinema’s to watch new movies with families or friends. There are two points of view among people where some people say watching the movies or dramas in their phones or tablets while others think that to get best experience from the movie is watching in the cinemas. We will discuss both of these views in below sections.
Firstly there are enourmous benefits of watching movies on mobiles, tablets or laptops as this is the cheap way of watching movie without wasting a lot of money on cinema tickets. The entertainments platform such as Netflix monthly subscription is less than one movie cinema ticket. Furthermore, watching movie on handheld devices gives the power to people to control the movie (Pause or Play anytime) and can be watched in their comfort zones.
Another view, people say that excitements and entertainment of movies can only be experienced in cinema which is actually correct. In cinema, people get a High definition big screen with best quality of audio system. All the actions and 3D effects that are put in the movies where movies directors spends a lot of money.
Both the above point of views have their pros and cons and in nutshell if you want to watch inexpensive and a lot movies than the movies on mobile devices are for you otherwise if one is looking for real movie experience with high-definition audio and video quality then opt for cinemas on the cost of money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...people get a High definition big screen with best quality of audio system. All the action...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7615658363 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55263607129 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516014234875 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1607240097 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.636363636 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174933706714 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887325645964 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617892384874 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117623787963 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525425316481 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.