You recently organized an all-day event meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel, in your letter
Say what the participants liked about the hotel
Explain why they were unhappy about the food
Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
I’m writing this letter to express our thoughts and wonderful experience that we had at your prestigious hotel during our whole day meeting organized last week.
My name is Yasir Ali from Matrix invent and last week on July 15th we organized an all-day company meeting at your hotel which was fantastic experience. After the meeting we followed up all the participant and ask for their feedback for the services that were provided by your hotel to our participants.
From the feedback, we have concluded that all the services such as Decorations, sound system, air conditioning, behaviour of your staff was over whelming and fabulous. But the only services that has been disliked by our participants was the food. The participants have complained that the food was not in good quality such as the hygiene and taste was not as per our expectations. Also the food was served which was not hot and fresh.
I would like to suggest some of the suggestion that we got during the feedback about improving the quality and taste of the food in your hotel. Following are our suggestions.
1. The food hygiene should be good and the all employers who are serving food should be wearing good clothes and cover their hairs.
2. All the plates and dishes should be washed and soaked properly.
3. The food should be served hot and fresh.
Yours Sincerely,
Yasir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... taste was not as per our expectations. Also the food was served which was not hot a...
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Line 4, column 25, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ot and fresh. I would like to suggest some of the suggestion that we got during the feedb...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rved hot and fresh. Yours Sincerely, Yasir
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87553648069 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59613020844 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549356223176 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5693680915 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3846153846 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325591790849 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111541016236 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803164159353 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13815781629 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100213157751 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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