The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been a resident of Alesta neighborhood for several years, but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with poor performance of the rubbish collecting system in your department. Earlier they used to come and collect the garbage from homes every day. Now they come only once a week. Additionally, there are not enough a rubbish bin in our environment so that there is a lot of problem around the bin.
Furthermore, If the garbage collector come too late and weren’t enough a week, the streets of the neighborhood will be seriously pollution. Neighbors are faced with several health problems due to pollution of the poor functioning collection in the streets. Moreover, stray animals cause unwanted views along the streets owing to insufficient rubbish ribs.
I would like to suggest that you should organize a schedule working properly, therefore, collecting the team comes for rubbish in every day a week. Besides, there are put two rubbish ribs in the streets as starting and ending by your collecting department.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and take measures to implement them.
Yours sincerely,
Rıdvan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I have been a resident of Alesta neighbo...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...bin in our environment so that there is a lot of problem around the bin. Furthermore, If th...
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Line 13, column 128, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
..., collecting the team comes for rubbish in every day a week. Besides, there are put two rubb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21578947368 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95969695986 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1848053383 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303807892577 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100230248849 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710773217836 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158043869555 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955821331146 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.