The table below shows thenumbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
he table compares the total quantity of people visiting Ashdown Museum over the year before and after it was restored, while the pie charts illustrate their satisfaction levels during the same two periods.
Overall, the higher number of visitors after the museum was renovated. Besides, their satisfaction level increased significantly.
The year before refurbishment with the total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum at 74,000. After the museum was repaired, the figure for people visiting Ashdown Museum at 92,000. The number of visitors increased by nearly 25%.
The year before the renovation, half of the people visiting the Ashdown Museum felt dissatisfaction. Only 15% of visitors felt very satisfied and nearly one in three visitors cited felt satisfied. Just 5% for people visiting Ashdown Museum had neutral opinions.
The year after the renovation, the number of people visiting Ashdown Museum felt very satisfied doubled. The figure for visitors felt satisfied rose to 40%. In contrast, the number of people in low or very low satisfaction levels decreased sharply at 15% and 5%. The figure for people of no response remained steady.
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- It is argue that parents od children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are reponsible for the children s actions To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36464088398 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7182769614 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453038674033 0.622605031667 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 10.0 0.824742268041 1212% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7163016328 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318928147387 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127558884156 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863327755926 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203446479353 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677501380108 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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