This is no dispute that expanding use of automobiles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 26.3917525773 4% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 44.0 937.175257732 5% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 9.0 206.0 4% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 1.73205080757 3.78020617076 46% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 3.14269680527 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 9.0 127.690721649 7% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.622605031667 161% => OK
syllable_count: 16.2 290.88556701 6% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 16.3608247423 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 44.0 76.5299724578 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.0 16.8248392259 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 4.34317383033 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0699725434181 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699725434181 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699725434181 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.42 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 7.45979381443 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.31 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 3.0 41.2886597938 7% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 8.54432989691 66% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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