Dear Mr. Brook,
This letter is written in order to request you about the immediate help required for the people, who are in the department of manufacturing in our firm, due to the old machinery.
In the manufacturing department, there is a group of 20 workers who are continuously working to mould the metal wires on the machines and they have been facing troubles since 2 months. They have complained to the head of the department, but not any action is taken in regard to this matter till now.
While the workers are working on the machines, they faced severe issues related to the speed of the equipment as there are more wires are arrived and sometimes fell from the moving belt before the delivery of the previous wires. Not only it impact on their physically comfort to pick up and alter quickly, but also make strain in the workplace, so the performance of work is fell down as well as it would definitely impact on the overall productivity of the company.
If the old machines in the department are repaired at the earliest then it would beneficial for the workers. In case it is impossible to repair that machinery, it is high time employer ordered the new ones as soon as possible due to the raising risks at the working place. Should I request you to stop work until a decision is taken since it could be dangerous for the employees, I would be really grateful to you.
Looking for a prompt response from you regarding this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Catherine Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acturing department, there is a group of 20 workers who are continuously working ...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
...very of the previous wires. Not only it impact on their physically comfort to pick up ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, regarding, so, then, well, while, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65779467681 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62140760271 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5759243062 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 4.34317383033 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104970840552 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430663271039 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379505203094 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592573100039 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405815448591 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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