Recent research has shown that within the Europian Union the largest differences between the earnings of men and women exists in the UK. Many equal rights compaigners believe that immediate actions should be taken to close the gender gap. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is irrefutably true that, in most of the regions of Europian continents, The United Kingdom, there is excessive pay gap amongst the workers due to their gender discremination such as women earns less revenue whereas males receive more income at the same position and job. I completely agree with the aforementioned notion about eliminating gender gap for salaries, and to justify my opinion, this essay shall first demonstrates that not only women have all the essential skills and education, but also impact on the nation’s development.
To commence, while considering the primary aspects associated with the aforementioned statement, first and foremost is that due to in depth knowledge, women could excel in any field. To explicate, owing to the fact that, from the past few decades, there are enormous changes amongst the thinking of people to educate girls, this decision is proved highly beneficial for the women, which has given the opportunity to educate themselves beyond schooling, and they reached at the peak like the man. Besides, they have acquired exceptional skills in terms of scientific knowledge, engineering, medical science, teaching and much more; therefore, there is lack of differences among both genders man and women with a view to earning money. To cite an example, Kalpana Chawla, from India, is the first women who showed her excellent skills in the education of astronomy in 1997 in the USA, for this reason, she is selected by NASA (National Aeronautics and Space Administration ) to land at the moon by a spaceship.
Contempolating further, the other imperative factor to alleviate wages gap is that women are also gaining name and fame for the nation. To elaborate, if any female is working and earning at a high rate than it is not only de-proves the famous quote “Man is the Breadwinner for the family” as women are working similarly as like as man and spend a lot of time and dedication towards their work. Although there are some opponents to this elimination of equal wages trend, it is high time women get their rewards in the same scenario of man in terms of earning equal amount of money or medals, so it would definitely cast a profound impact on the overall development of the nation especially to decline the poverty, literacy rates and dependency on others. For instance, a research conducted by university of Cambridge, in year 2020, revealed that the number of women participation in the business departments was escalated by 40% which was 10% more as compare to the previous reports related to this field.
In compendium, having pondered-over a great deal of thoughts and deliberation, it could be encapsulated that well-education with high attainments in different streams and mitigation the major issues of nation. The given statement is logically sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 461.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10845986985 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93241792979 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572668112798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7592443969 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.25 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4166666667 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111654582815 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409417893164 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252169804228 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678656420273 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231582024863 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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