The trend of using own vehicles is being commonly observed among various countries. This essay will cover two areas: causes of this fashion, which not only associated with the convenience of individuals, but also linked with more safety; and the government can motivate public through regular campaigning and enhancements in the public automobiles.
The primitive motive of using private vehicles is more convenience over the uses of other transports. Owing to the fact that people can travel according to their time, there is no need to wait in the long queues, even people can easily travel early or late, so it is better for their easy travelling. Therefore, in this busy lifetime, people save a lot of time and utilize that time in the other works as well as buying own car is becoming a common trend to show of status in society. A survey, for instance, conducted by National Travel Organization in Mumbai, in 2013, revealed that out 100, 85% people prefer to travel by their own cars rather than public transport like train buses.
Besides the flexible timing, safety is the other crucial option of using private transport. This is because people who travel at night can travel independently with locking system in their cars, there is no indulgence of unknown persons especially for the working women, for their better safety in the personal vehicle as compared to travel in public buses at night time; resultantly, in the emergency situation, patient can easily be reached at the hospital and no need to wait for the other options in this way, the lives are saved.
Government can take some crucial steps to minimize the raising number of individual vehicles by doing regular campaigning. Public give attention to this matter since this is one of the best ways to inform public about the harmful effects of increasing number of vehicles. There are many obstacles related to traffic on roads: air and noise pollution, increasing accidents, congestion on roads. Consequently, more awareness will be introduced among all the people to save the environment and to live in a pollution free area that is directly linked to the health issues.
Apart from this, some improvements can be change the choice of people to select public cars and buses. The reason behind this is the better facilities in terms of low fares, security using cameras in buses, ac in buses and fast service. All these modifications can change the entire transportation system which definitely leads a better system to decline the adverse effects of vehicle on roads as well as on the atmosphere. Hence, people can save their money and prefer to travel in the public cars.
In conclusion, while it is clear that the main reasons are originated from the convenience while travelling and more security, the situation can also be ameliorated by regular motivations by advertisements, enhancements in the public services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2418.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 480.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73172907698 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1540417285 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.235294118 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2352941176 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323585011352 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101435392575 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408327573839 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164853794807 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324479917765 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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