In the current era of technology, a large number of people is giving importance to the creative persons: musicians, painters and writers specifically due to their contribution towards nation name. Not only it represents the story of several things in front of public, but also art is able to relax mind and body from hectic schedule.
The primitive reason to give more attention to the artists is directly links with the nation publicity. Owing to the fact that they show their talent in other parts of the world, people become aware of the nations from which the artists are belongs. Therefore, the particular area of the famous personality is gradually gaining attention from all over the world. For instance, Punjab is gaining popularity in all over the world after the hit songs of famous celebrities such as Gurdas Mann, Satinder Sartaaj.
Besides the name and fame to the country, it is also helped out to explain the hidden story and emotions of the people publically. This is because artists have talent to explain the deep story of people in some interesting ways to audience, they are able to show some hidden vulnerabilities of society in entertainment way, and people are listening to them with great interest; resultantly, they influenced society for the betterment of life.
Furthermore, art is a way to relax mind and to inhale the positive energy. Since people are spending a lot of time in their office hours and to fulfil their materialistic needs, they have lack of time to explore their hidden talents and to refresh themselves, so art is a way which is a combination of great pleasure in terms of relaxation, fresh mind and better stress free life. Hence, people do several tasks of their choice: dancing, singing, painting, writing and travelling to enjoy themselves, and made their better future that is totally impossible in the field of science. For instance, had my friend Joseph, never gave attention to his photography talent and spend many more years in IT company, he could not have got the opportunity to shoot with the famous wild photographer in South America.
In conclusion, owing to the above explained reasons to giving name and fame to the particular area, deep knowledge of particular things and also to relax mind and body from the busy lifestyle, I am convinced that it is right to give importance to these great people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In the current era of technology, a large number of people is giving importance to the crea...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...l over the world after the hit songs of famous celebrities such as Gurdas Mann, Satinder Sartaaj. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72102462319 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5125 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0452444445 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.384615385 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7692307692 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0700645841856 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265607966124 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0169332482705 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390263401495 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165397185678 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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