Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that your bus quality is declining day by day. My colleagues are also facing the same issue.
Firstly, the Air condition in bus is not working properly. After complaining several time to the driver, the problem has still not resolved. It is so suffocating without the air pass, one person yesterday vomited due to suffocation and had to be taken to the hospital.
Secondly, the driver doesn't go to the desired route everytime. He takes the route as per his choice and many times leave the passenger in between the way, full payment is charged by the driver and has to pay extra for the taxi.
Many complaints have been made to the management, still the problem has not been solved.
I would like you to take some action against them and do the needful.
yiurs sincerely
Honey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
...not working properly. After complaining several time to the driver, the problem has still no...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...o the hospital. Secondly, the driver doesnt go to the desired route everytime. He t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yiurs
...ction against them and do the needful. yiurs sincerely Honey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4660218361 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695945945946 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1147031179 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138482155975 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456073533955 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562073678988 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727099107991 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058257976683 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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