Dear sir/Madam
I am writing to report the problems with public transportation services in tabletop view point area for about 1 month.
The major issue regarding transportation services are frequency of the buses in east side of the Sunnyvale town namely tabletop view point area. Though west side of the town is developing fast, number of buses allotted by central public administration to town remained same. In addition to this town authorities diverted buses from east to west route on regular basis. The whole stretch worth 21 miles and this take lot of time to reach either ends of town.
On account of these issues people who uses public transport on regular basis are heavily effected as they have to set their time according to new schedule. Their effective time is being wasted for waiting at bus depot rather than spending in office or at the home with family. Moreover, they had to take leaves or late coming at offices due to cancellation or delayed services.
For above aforementioned reason town authorities should draw attention of central public administration and asked them for sanction more buses for the town. Also town authorities should divide town in two parts and allocate buses for either of them differently.
I believe that if these suggestions are implemented, it will help arrest these problems.
Yours faithfully,
James Sutherland
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...m for sanction more buses for the town. Also town authorities should divide town in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16071428571 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77855077113 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2862167003 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133610527765 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517708217792 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562786588943 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822315469328 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657860417857 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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