In last few decades world's engineers and scientists had invented countless utilitarian equipment and technology. An internet is also one part of those inventions. Some opine that internet is the most important invention in today's world. I agree with this statement however like every coin has two sides this invention also has positive and negative outcomes but positive outweigh the negative. In this essay I will discuss points to support my view.
One of the most important benefit of this invention is that, due to internet entire world has shrunk into a Global village. People can talk, interact, share ideas, do business with other countries and easily adapt good things of other cultures and ultimately this leads to better standard of living of people. With the help of an internet people can easily access resources from anywhere of the world, global trade, international tourism is increased which adds in growth of the economy. For example, now business can sell their stuff online through e-commerce sites and expand their reach. As economy grow government can spend more on education, healthcare, transport and infrastructure to give better living to society.
Moreover, a common man also gain publicity and stardom through internet. For example, if any common has some talent they can share the same with world through social media and gain publicity. People can search for any type of information on internet in just few seconds and this makes people aware about what happening around them. This invention has saved lot of time and money of government, business and individuals. For example, in digital world common man use internet for various things like online reservation, internet banking, online shopping etc. by sitting at home just with few simple clicks and save their time and money.
However, this invention has some drawbacks like people are connected with each other through social media but face to face interaction is vanished in thin air which makes human to lives isolated life and due to that young generation don't know the value of relationships.
To put in a nutshell, pros of internet is outweigh the cons and that's why I can say that internet is the most important invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14049586777 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59282365045 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.255574456 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246898287678 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770025829783 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529812697085 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141277248811 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438197390096 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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