Dear John,
How have you been? It's been too long since we were last in touch. I hope you are doing fine with your marking and media course. I am writing to you in response to your letter requesting info and my thoughts on foreign direct investment in e-commerce segment.
FDI is the bread and butter for new market and upcoming start ups. As In my country investors like to play safe, they do not prefer investing in some start ups which may or may not be rewarding after long period. Currently government stricken use of FDI in e-commerce affecting thousands of companies like Amazon, Flipkart to name a few.
Now-a-days people do love sales every once in a while due to festive season. Due to this change in rules government discourage investors all around globe to invest in e-commerce in my country. People are not happy as they will not find bumper sale offers in near future.
For me this news served as a blessing in disguise. Being a start up I can raise money up to 100 grand via FDI. As you are only friend I have in New Zealand, I need your help to arrange some meeting with possible clients. I am planning to visit you in early June this year. I will message you the other details regarding start up on your Facebook account.
Feel free to contact me on my mobile no. for any other details.
Best Regards,
James Sutherland
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5306122449 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38520359053 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644897959184 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0932006866 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183142740111 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475970994234 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610780411264 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819375510981 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796485768522 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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