Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing in connection with your public disclaimer about closing sport center in Sunnyvale, Santa Barbara county. It is quiet heartening to say local council is not able to see the positive atmosphere this sport center creates among the county people.
This sport center is situated at the heart of the town and well connected with public or private transport. People spend their beautiful morning in adjoining garden with practicing Yoga and Meditation. I am used to going there with my friends every morning for some volleyball practice and some quality leisure time with family in evening. Moreover, This center served as the best coaching center to lots of kids in surrounding counties which didn't have sport facilities at that time.
Importance of this sport center is immense among the elders. As they are not frequent travelers they use this center as a meeting point with others and spend some quality time. Council is planning to demolish whole facility and construct a mega shopping mall instead of it is not fruitful for society. Development at cost of society is not acceptable at all. Council should not plan to generate revenue from every aspects of the society.
Hoping for your favorable response in this matter. If council wants me and my friends can visit them for further discussion on this matter as a representative from community.
Yours faithfully
James Sutherland
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15948275862 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60675386742 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616379310345 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8696620149 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261176687842 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886788853229 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556712895852 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154753430047 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636114995502 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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