Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to give some information about our college help-desk and to suggest a few advices in order to improve the structure of it to help to students and all employees of the university.
As you probably hear that the information desk has been complained many times by both pupils and parents due to inappropriate style and useless position in compared to all colleges. According to them, first and major problem is that students could not contact with it when they need to it and whenever they call the support desk, anyone do not answer the calling. Another problem related to it is that the table is so far distance from all classes which it makes inaccessible.
As junior students, we would be grateful if you could take some measurements. For example, it would perfect if it builds up near to dormitory of students and campus centre. On the other hand, it could be perfect idea of having self-service laptops on the desk not to lose much more time to solve our problems.
I look forward to hearing for positive response from you in the near future.
Yours Faithfully.
James Phillip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ever they call the support desk, anyone do not answer the calling. Another problem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76262626263 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62751038735 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3927706908 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252006097797 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709994908143 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636496499933 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132897715605 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588489515265 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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