There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:Describe what the problem with the changing rooms i

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There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.

Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:

Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
Say what happened the last times you complained
Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about poor quality of change room at the sports center.

I am a privilege member of STC sports center since its inception. me and my daughter visit the center daily, as she is training for national swimming championship to be held next month. The center provides the best amenities for budding sportsman and this is the reason, I recommended my daughter to train here.

From last few weeks, the changing room next to the pool is in pathetic condition. The doors are malfunctioning, and the room has a peculiar bad smell all the time. Due to this kid’s are forced to enter the pool without taken shower, thus making the pool water dirty. Moreover, I am afraid to let me daughter use dirty pool, as she might fall sick. I have complained last week to one of your staff stationed next to the pool, however no actions have been taken yet.

I would request you to kindly intervene and take necessary actions to resolve this issue at the earliest. Your prompt response will help my daughter continue her practice for championship.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mahesh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Me
... STC sports center since its inception. me and my daughter visit the center daily,...
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Line 9, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...however no actions have been taken yet. I would request you to kindly intervene ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, thus, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86934673367 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57265820468 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5448710995 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171479190669 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595302763361 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616970648876 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102079814919 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819762523394 0.0580467560999 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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