There is a problem in the road outside your house Write a letter to your local councilor In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

Dear Mr. Loyko,
I am writing to you regarding the road damages that have appeared, after a powerful hurricane and long-term showers, in the area where I live ahead of my detached house.
My name is Tetiana Lisnytska and I have been a Dnipro city resident since 2005 year, living at 50 Castle Road.
I would like to underline that the traffic is really heavy in this area and these deep pits jeopardize drivers’ safety. Moreover, they are even threats for cyclers, because deteriorations are invisible at night in darkness due to the absence of street lights in this zone now. There is a strong likelihood that it will lead to road accidents.
I hope this dangerous issue will receive your attention and will be resolved in immediate time. Setting of warning signs should be a priority task. The following important steps are fixing road deformations and installation of solar lamps instead expired ones.

Thank you in advance for your help in straightening out this matter.

Yours sincerely,
Tania Boyko

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00588235294 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67765972291 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717647058824 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7472403539 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142306601149 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554892149145 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426738688124 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644854441224 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346212810761 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.