There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
tell the Councillor what you would like to be done
Dear Councillor,
I am writing this letter regarding a problem something happened in near my house on the street. I live at College and spadina intersection which is next to Kensington market and convenient locations to access everywhere. I was at a coffee shop around spadina street. I was just having a cup of coffee and minding my own business, when I started to get distracted weird noise. Since our council start to construct new crossways in front of the Rexall store, water have been flooding from the ground with weird noise.
There must have been 5 or 6 weeks after the construction. If I were to guess, the noise and water come from the deep underground water path. And for many of neighbors who are living around there complained about the inconvenient situation. For example, Rora who is living right next to me installed a noise proof wall because the noise distracted her work. So, I strongly appeal my opinion as a representative of our village. The construction should be done as soon as possible and by equipping a security camera plays an important role in keeping an eye on.
Isn't that how we develop ourselves for communicating for the future?
Sincerely,
MJ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...venient locations to access everywhere. I was at a coffee shop around spadina str...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at a coffee shop around spadina street. I was just having a cup of coffee and min...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...important role in keeping an eye on. Isnt that how we develop ourselves for commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85784313725 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85536165094 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68137254902 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0883203254 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5833333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0438840668417 0.216113520407 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131019460704 0.0766984524023 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352912239689 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0159780182958 0.12726935374 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119890263647 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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