There is a problem with the road outside of your house.
Write a letter to your local councillor.
In your letter:
introduce yourself (name, house, address)
explain what the problem is (dead animal, 2 days, no one came to clean the body)
tell the councillor what you would like to be done (send someone to do the job)
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform that there is a huge problem with the road in front of my house.
Allow me to introduce myself. my name is truong Nguyen and I am a local resident living in the West town neighborhood. my address is 268 grand avenue and I have resided in this town for almost 10 years.
about 4 days ago, my neighbors and I found a dead dog lying on our street and we immediately reported to the local police. However, no officials have shown up and had a look at the scene so far. this morning, people in the area still saw the dead body of the poor dog and it was rotten partially. this situation got worse when the heavy smell of the body spread and no one could take it anymore.
I believe everyone in my neighborhood is very concerned about this incident at this point. Therefore, it would be very appreciated if you could send someone to clean the street and filter the air as soon as possible.
I really look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
truong
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-06-07 | drtruong92 | 70 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43757480851 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2122801921 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146678375009 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506896126142 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523480710221 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690899114513 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720910991638 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.