These days, many people actively support or promote a good cause, whether a worldwide concern, such as animal welfare or environmental awareness, or a local cause, such as the care of their local children’s play area, or the cleaning up of graffiti in their town centre.
You are actively involved in promoting and supporting a good cause. Write an article for your local newspaper to convince readers to support your cause.
It is our pleasure to note that many people have recently come forward to support our charitable programmes. It is our pleasure to share with our readers that people, irrespective of their ages and genders, seem to be eager to lend their helping hand in our activities. In this letter, I would like to present accomplishments of our organisation and urge the esteemed readers to participate in different activities depending on their interests. Our organization is benevolently supported by national government with allocation of funds for the improvement of living conditions in the slum areas.
One of the important things that participants can do is to support our charitable organization financially. Your financial support will make sure that we can fulfill our promises without any hurdles.
Secondly, the local residents can explore the possibility to be a volunteer with us. It is no secret that we need a large number of young people to properly manage our relief and charity work. Our volunteers will be responsible for transferring of books, food items, utensils etc. from one place to another. If you have any vehicle, you may bring it along with it as it will significantly enhance the effectiveness of our work.
To sum up, my sincere appeal to all of the readers is to come forward and contribute to ameliorate the living and working conditions in our sub-urban areas. I would also like to request people to contact us at our office if you wish to donate anything to us. We are looking forward to seeing your active participation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...r with us. It is no secret that we need a large number of young people to properly manage our rel...
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Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... work. To sum up, my sincere appeal to all of the readers is to come forward and contribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00386100386 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05075015684 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 290.88556701 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3794336668 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5714285714 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669829285268 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265676703817 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196044716723 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417382162458 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142091382487 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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