Time off work
Dear Mr Johnson,
I am writing to request for a study leave in order to prepare for my forthcoming M.Sc examinations.
As you know, I am currently studying Business Administration as a second-degree qualification at the University of Lagos. The final examination will take place on the 16th of September, and as a result, I will need some time off work to prepare - effective August 15th.
In order to fully prepare and write all papers, it will take about 1 month. During this period, I will not only write the examination, but also finalize my project work, as it is due for completion. Therefore, the requested 30-day leave is crucial to the success of both the examination and the project.
However, I am fully aware of the lapses that would occur due to my absence at work, and as a precaution, I will begin to work extra hours - 7 a.m. to 6 p.m - instead of the traditional 8 a.m. to 4 p.m., daily. My Accounting department team members will, in addition, voluntarily, perform some of my duties while I am away.
I will appreciate if you consider this request, for it will positively affect my outcome.
Yours sincerely,
Olu Bright
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.815 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98730194633 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4409720866 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144457537942 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509814073395 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908423360718 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728054022319 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813554852779 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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