Topic- Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
There are many cultures according to different regions around the globe and these cultures attract people to visit them. Tourism is also a main part of the economy. The economy of many countries is dependent on tourism.
Tourism creates employment and people are curious to see how they are living and wants to interact with them.
Artists who sell there work to tourists and helps them to spread their culture around the globe.
The food industry, travel agencies, Artisans etc have a big role in countries growth and which directly increases the GDP of a country.
Children's learn from different religions, wars, civilizations during there visit to different places. History teaches everybody when they come closure to that places.
I partially agree with some people that cultural traditions are destroyed due interference of people who have the only interest to make money.
Because they don't bother about heritage buildings, things which are preserved from 1000 years like sculpture, books, documents, and ornaments etc.
For these kinds of people, we have to make strict rules and punishment if they harm any culture.
Otherwise, tourism and culture are like two arms of the clock which keeps a nation living.
- People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries 76
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 60
- Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they becomemore efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-dayservice in 1970 to 20 cents 50
- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways. 50
- Over time, the costs of processing go down because as organizations learn how to do things better, they becomemore efficient. In color film processing, for example, the cost of a 3-by-5-inch print fell from 50 cents for five-dayservice in 1970 to 20 cents 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y interest to make money. Because they dont bother about heritage buildings, things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26395939086 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49117073156 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1178385879 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165687091809 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545691226294 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068244355303 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643452281377 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671304122782 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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