Train Service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company
• Explain how it affects you
• Descibe the situation
• Tell the train company what you would like them to do
Dear sir / madam,
I am a resident of Newtown and a regular passenger in your train service. Recently it is noticed that the trains connecting nearby cities were decreased which affected the daily commuters like me.
To brief, sudden reduction in the train service disturbed my timing for work and it is miserable to travel using road transportation as it consumes my time by spending in traffic jams. This decision is not only affected me but also the other fellow inhabitants who depends on your train service for work and education.
As a valuable customer of your service, I would like to provide few suggestions for the betterment of the service. It will be helpful if you could run the services in the peek time especially school and office timings instead of the low rush times which provides justice to the transport problems faced by the people.
Hence, kindly consider my situations and take the proper action.
Awaiting for you response in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Sd /-
Name.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...ituations and take the proper action. Awaiting for you response in this matter. Yours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66054733292 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6052048349 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242322694232 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948835525059 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042431181726 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111378016251 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612725708695 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.