While your friend was on vacation you stayed in his apartment. While you were there you dropped an
Expensive bowl and broke it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain what happened
Apologize for the accident
Tell your friend how you plan to make it up to him.
Dear Joy,
I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirit. Firstly, I want to thank you for allow me to stay in your apartment when you was on vacation. I put all the things in it’s place it self, but one thing you did not get on the table, that is your bowl because unfortunately that bowl get broken by me.
I really apologize to you for such matter. Actually I was on call and someone knock the door, so I just went to open the door and at that time my hand get touched forcely to the table and bowl falls down and it get broken.
I know that bowl is very expensive and I will try to give the bowl as it is. I bring tht bowl with me and one of my friend is master in attaching broken things. So I will give it to him to repair this bowl and return it to you after few days. Still if it not done properly then I will bear the cost of bowl.
Again I apologize for my mistake. Hope you understand me.
Hope to see you soon.
Your’s friend,
Trupti.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Joy, I hope this letter finds you in best of ...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...I put all the things in it's place it self, but one thing you did not get on the t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knocks'.
Suggestion: knocks
...ter. Actually I was on call and someone knock the door, so I just went to open the do...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...to the table and bowl falls down and it get broken. I know that bowl is very ex...
^^^
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...wl and return it to you after few days. Still if it not done properly then I will bea...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.03535353535 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09563706901 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4387802312 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4615384615 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335436120936 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129277100818 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908338664509 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159550864078 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936893998913 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.9 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.