Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions to the problem

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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,

A)Introduce yourself,
B)Explain what the problem is,
C)Suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the disturbing loud noises from your construction site at Park Street, Manhattan. My name is John Gunderson and I am a resident at Lakeview Apartment which is next to your construction site.

Everyday, starting from 8 am to 6pm, continuous noise of construction instruments is disturbing me and my family. Road rollers are continuously on and cement grinder is running whole day, which is creating a plethora of sound pollution. The construction also going on during weekends, which has ruined our family time so far.

I think the possible solution would be to change the timings to 10am - 4pm every day of the week weekends. For weekend, the construction should be only for 2 hours in the afternoon. This will help all the residents and labours to enjoy their weekend without any sound pollution.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

Your Faithfully,
John Gunderson

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...is next to your construction site. Everyday, starting from 8 am to 6pm, continuous ...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ound pollution. I am looking forward to hear from you. Your Faithfully, John Gun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92188036781 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685897435897 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0295459858 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127942849706 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499528178774 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466759318191 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702903781557 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426736277349 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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