Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter
1) Introduce yourself,
2) explain what the problem is,
3) suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my annoyance with the road work going on in the area of Village Green. I hope you would consider implementing the solutions mentioned below to reduce the disturbance caused by ongoing road work.
I am Nilesh Shah, a resident of Rochester hills, and currently living in Village green. I am a Civil engineer by profession and highly support your decision of expanding the narrow roads in the crowded neighborhoods of the city.
As the road work is progressing throughout the day and night, it is causing a great deal of problem to the local resident of my area. People are finding difficult to sleep at night because of the loud noises coming from the heavy machinery and concrete trucks. Lack of sleep is affecting both the students and working professionals to a great extent.
As a Civil engineer, I would like to recommend solution to this problem. It is highly possible to meet the project deadline in time even if you stop night shift work, which is between 10 p.m to 7 a.m. To achieve this, put the people working in night shift into the day shift, this way resources will be doubled in day shift and you would be able to get same amount of work done.
I hope you would give immediate attention to this matter. I would highly appreciate if you could please consider implementing the proposed solution.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mr.Nilesh Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...urbance caused by ongoing road work. I am Nilesh Shah, a resident of Rochester...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... and currently living in Village green. I am a Civil engineer by profession and h...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... implementing the proposed solution. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Line 16, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nilesh
...ring from you. Yours faithfully, Mr.Nilesh Shah
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.776 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6328873884 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.71788369 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8461538462 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220049050371 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716676263016 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345904130517 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958443118031 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316773029632 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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