write to the airline company about something that you have lost in the flight.
Describe what is that you left behind
why is it so important
what would you like them to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with my gold watch which I have misplaced during my flight back home to Mumbai from Delhi.
While flying with your airlines last Saturday on flight number 3098B, I kept my watch in the pouch below the tray table. I was seated in 27A and I might have forgotten to pick up the watch. When I reached my house and started unpacking is when I noticed that it was missing.
This watch belonged to my late grandmother and was given to me at my college graduation. I was planning to hand it over to my son, who finishes high school next month. It is, therefore, invaluable to me and would hope to receive it quickly.
I would highly appreciate it if the airline staff can consult with the lost and found department and confirm if they have found my watch. I am attaching a picture of it along with this letter for identification. I would like to request you to please let me know if the item is in your possession.
I look forward to a positive revert and guidelines on how to claim for it at the airport desk.
Yours faithfully
Karishma Dave
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng with this letter for identification. I would like to request you to please let...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...w if the item is in your possession. I look forward to a positive revert and g...
^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the airport desk. Yours faithfully Karishma Dave
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46766169154 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56942898285 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7310323905 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638044829627 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0183707427368 0.0766984524023 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319040218951 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0339865904033 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290619928038 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.