Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include
What the presentation is about
The equipment needed
Suggestions to set it up
Dear Anika,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to seek your help regarding the presentation that I am going to deliver on 25th September at 10:00 AM. The venue is Concordia Auditorium, Brankley Street, Surrey BC.
I have been selected to deliver a presentation about our company, The Signity Solution’s this year’s performance reviews and targets for 2020. I will start this presentation by providing insight about company’s achievement, followed by the CEO, will take over and discuss about future growth opportunities.
As you know, I am illiterate about Computers, I have no equipments with me to get the presentation going and therefore, I want you to bring all the required cables such as HDMI cable, Stand and Projector. Let me know in case if need to buy anything, I will pay for it.
The presentation is going to held at 10:00 AM in the moring, which is quite early. Thus, you have to reach at the campus atleast one hour in advance, for the setup. Let me know if you got any issues with the commute, I would pick you up from your place.
I look forward hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Jaspreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...m writing this letter to seek your help regarding the presentation that I am going to del...
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Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pany’s achievement, followed by the CEO, will take over and discuss about future ...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... for it. The presentation is going to held at 10:00 AM in the moring, which is qui...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Let me know if you got any issues with the commute, I would pick you up from your place. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74874371859 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79995562847 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5927933588 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190651117917 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585768049872 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391395699285 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882065110368 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476711960084 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.