Write a letter to a colleague asking for assistance setting up equipment for an upcoming presentation of yours. Include
What the presentation is about
The equipment needed
Suggestions to set it up
Dear A,
I am writing this letter to seek your assistance for my upcoming presentation at the college auditorium. Let me explain to you in more detail.
I would like to infrom that, as a part of our yearly assignment, I have been alloted a topic related to today's banking scenario and its future, as I am not familiat with the topic and the subject, and your father is in the banking industry, I think you are the most suitable person who can help me, as I am running sort of time, due to my current illness. Secondly, if you could please make some search on the internet for the photos and some background which we can attached in the slide.
Further, I also want to infrom that while enquiring from the teachers, they inform that the projector had also not working, and a white board and a stand is to be needed at the auditorium for the same.
In additon to this, I also like to inform that I have arranged the projector and all other equipment, however, by just coordinating with the vendor, they can drop at the college and made all necessary arrangements and fittings.
Looking forward for a positive response from your side, I hope you can understand my condition due to my illness and I am ready for your help in future. For any clarification feel free to contact me.
Regards,
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'attach'
Suggestion: attach
...photos and some background which we can attached in the slide. Further, I also want to...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hers, they inform that the projector had also not working, and a white board and...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... inform that the projector had also not working, and a white board and a stand i...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ite board and a stand is to be needed at the auditorium for the same. In addito...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iton to this, I also like to inform that I have arranged the projector and all ot...
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Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor and all other equipment, however, by just coordinating with the vendor, they ...
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Line 6, column 143, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...my illness and I am ready for your help in future. For any clarification feel free to con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48523206751 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58333311797 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.569338185 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.875 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136148380554 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613515376249 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788877330532 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08644642078 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775037652066 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.