Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day!
My name is Savita Paul student of 1st year B. Tech. (IT) from Rayat & Bahra Institute of management. I am wirting this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the " Auto Cad designer" computer cource which was held on dated - 27-07-2019. This session was deliver by Mr. Saxena.
I had attended this course with my two friends. There are so many lacking in training session. First, seating arrangements are not properly. So me and my friends had decided to attend this session standing mode. Secondly, the projector was not working propely. In addition, the voice of the lecturer was very slow, hence which was not audible for the back benchers.
I would like suggest to make all arangements in advance. Online booking would save time and also done seating arrangements properly. They can do set up check before starting the course.
I hope you will look into this problem seriously and implement the listed suggestions to improve the situation.
Your sincerely,
Savita Paul.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, look, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1775147929 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75846161756 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.751479289941 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.663789343 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3333333333 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2666666667 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18659407488 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498345277072 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418538707719 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884847816627 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309523944979 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.58 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.