Write a letter to the company and in your letter:
1. Introduce yourself
2. Explain the problem
3. And state what action you would like from the company
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the Sunny TV flat screen, fifty-two inches I bought last week Tuesday from your store outlet in Down Town Road is not functioning properly. I called the customer service immediately when the problem started but I am still to see any action.
Let me explain the problem in details. The TV was in good condition when I bought it but to my despair when I got home everything have changed. Firstly, it was the image quality which became very blurry then later the power switched off and after two minutes on automatically. I immediately informed the customer service about the TV issues and they assured me they would send a technician right away but four days have passed and no one has come to fix it.
Could you please send a repairer to come over and repair it and if it is not possible then you replace the TV with a brand new since it has two years warranty.
Thanks for your understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61325966851 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54146048511 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668508287293 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0746645851 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904161459752 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371423267249 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258740910312 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522028002844 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023787030583 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.