Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter include:
- what you bought
- what problem is
- why you want a refund
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to request you refund a recent online purchase I have made from your company. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like this course of action to be realized.
I purchased a new tablet computer from your website last month to give to a friend of mine for his birthday. Unfortunately, it appears that he already has the same tablet computer in his office and thus has no need for the one I bought for him. I hope you can empathize with my situation. Having a tablet of my own, I really have no need for the item I purchased from you.
Thus, I would like to return this item to you for a refund. From your website I understand that if I send the item by mail to you within 60 days of the purchase date, I can expect to have my account credited for the full purchase price.
Gratefully yours,
Ryan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27777777778 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43069615506 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4974683702 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290468491134 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119855678145 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772643407958 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210293718731 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00939201200316 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.