write a letter complaining about your hotel accommodation.
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to give a feedback about a recent stay I had at your hotel for two days. I am a regular business traveller and stay in a variety of accommodations but would like to let you know I was highly dissatisfied with the stay at your hotel due to a number of reasons.
Firstly, I had a confirmed booking for a deluxe room but the accommodation I was given when I arrived at your hotel was a standard room. This room was without air conditioning and despite my repeated requests to change my room no action was taken by the hotel staff.
Secondly, the room was unhygienic with dirty bed sheets, which were not even changed for days. I had requested the receptionist to change the same and replace it with new ones. After repeated requests from my side, the hotel staff came and replaced the bed sheet.
I would like to let you know this kind of unprofessional behaviour is hurting your hotel reputation. As you are also aware that most of the customers nowadays read the reviews before booking an accommodation, similarly bad reviews will definitely have a direct impact on your business.
Thus I would request you to look into this matter and take necessary action as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ve a direct impact on your business. Thus I would request you to look into this m...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64444444444 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70302619619 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7109351547 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190418706458 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720022085375 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725800508616 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871267040521 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690871861567 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.